Thursday, November 21, 2013

Stars And Wishes

Information from the blog post

Diseases Beyond Diseases: The Presence of Persistent Tuberculosis in Skid Row, Los Angeles

http://epidatrmhs.blogspot.com/2013/04/diseases-beyond-diseases-presence-of.html

Stars                                                     Wishes

The reader sounded very interested in the topic               The writer of this blog sometimes did not 
and made me want to read more on the topic.                  explain information fully and got me confused.
                          
This person also really grabbed me with her starting      The writers resource was from another blog 
paragraph and cited the story really well and related      which may mean it is biased and you 
the topic to many things she/he has seen or done.           should not used bias information.


blog entry title 3
summary 9
connections to class and analysis 7
voice 4
conventions and extras 4

27/30

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